Refining my logo by Moe
This is my 15 refining logo. I would say my best one is the Moe Boba with the imagine in the middle. I think that's one of the best one, and eye catching for people who see it. I value that logo a lot, and I believe I will be able to maintain a lot of customers whenever I open my boba shop. I use different fonts for each letters, Like gothic Garamond, and etc. One thing I could have worked better is making better sizes, and organizing it very well. I will keep in mind for my next logo I make. Overall I think the imagine boba is one of the best one I made, and it's really aesthetic plus it's one of the highest standard. Also one more thing I would like to work on in my future is try to decorate it for me. For example: Putting more colors and more images in the logo. It will give a good vibe to logos, and more people be seeing the logo. I think scripted logos are also good, but I think more people are not a big fan of scripted logos. People want exemplary logos.
Most of the work produced looks amazing and I personally like your take on your artwork. Although that might be true, I still feel like the art work could possibly be overwhelming and could really be better if it same more simplistic. With that out the way, I still love the art keep it up.
ReplyDeleteI liked the one with the triangles, but maybe try to specify which is point, line, or plane so it'd be easy to tell which one's which.
ReplyDeleteLine One does have many lines but an outline, 6/8 box could help and filling some negative space with marker.
ReplyDeleteOverall good work Mohammed. I am seeing that drawing number one doesn't have enough ink. Try to add more ink so that it is visible. Designs are 10/10
ReplyDeleteYour plane drawings I enjoyed the most because there very unique than others. You could of separated the drawings in their different elements so they would be more organized. That's what I could have done.
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