Point Line Plane.
Mohammed Uddin
10/13/2022
Moe Blog
My thoughts on the events was that it was really good. I learned some new some from the people. I also saw that they're from different states but they're still working together which is good. I also saw how the presenters like Brandon how he presented his work from the past and the current too. I really loved Brandon work, I think he can do really well in the future as well. I also learned that they make a lot of money. I feel like when I do one of my works, I want to show them so I can get the point of view on what to work on so in the future I can make my work better and better. Than more people will come to me to see my work and then hire me for their job. I also be making a lot of money if my work is really good and if it catches people eyes when they pass by. I might also get commission if my work is really good and there is a lot of sales. I also liked theigo presentation, I like he edited the words that appear in the screen and also moved. I also liked they give him fee...
Most of the work produced looks amazing and I personally like your take on your artwork. Although that might be true, I still feel like the art work could possibly be overwhelming and could really be better if it same more simplistic. With that out the way, I still love the art keep it up.
ReplyDeleteI liked the one with the triangles, but maybe try to specify which is point, line, or plane so it'd be easy to tell which one's which.
ReplyDeleteLine One does have many lines but an outline, 6/8 box could help and filling some negative space with marker.
ReplyDeleteOverall good work Mohammed. I am seeing that drawing number one doesn't have enough ink. Try to add more ink so that it is visible. Designs are 10/10
ReplyDeleteYour plane drawings I enjoyed the most because there very unique than others. You could of separated the drawings in their different elements so they would be more organized. That's what I could have done.
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